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Haiku
Sept 8, 2005 10:07:13 GMT -5
Post by snarfe on Sept 8, 2005 10:07:13 GMT -5
anyone write haiku? i only just got into it...
(for those who may not know it's 5-7-5 syllables)
a tasteful fragrance conjures, mesmerises, no longer a dead soul
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Haiku
Sept 9, 2005 14:49:32 GMT -5
Post by chemicalyobessed on Sept 9, 2005 14:49:32 GMT -5
i know what they are cause we learned about it but i can't write them i wirte just poetry. a lot of it too
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Haiku
Sept 12, 2005 6:06:38 GMT -5
Post by snarfe on Sept 12, 2005 6:06:38 GMT -5
it's not a challenge or quite unachievable just write 5, 7, 5.
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Haiku
Sept 12, 2005 10:09:41 GMT -5
Post by daisy on Sept 12, 2005 10:09:41 GMT -5
^ XD
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zombie reagan
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Haiku
Sept 14, 2005 21:56:51 GMT -5
Post by zombie reagan on Sept 14, 2005 21:56:51 GMT -5
it's not a challenge or quite unachievable just write 5, 7, 5. yeah...that was 5, 7,6 syllables....seven is a two syllable word.
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Haiku
Sept 15, 2005 6:01:16 GMT -5
Post by snarfe on Sept 15, 2005 6:01:16 GMT -5
well done, spotted the deliberate mistake (i did say i just got into it) well..erm here's another Watch. Blasting the past psychosomatically. Don't grow up again.
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zombie reagan
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Haiku
Sept 15, 2005 22:51:46 GMT -5
Post by zombie reagan on Sept 15, 2005 22:51:46 GMT -5
so sweet and pungent crimson inside outside pale death is a soft rose
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Haiku
Sept 23, 2005 6:48:56 GMT -5
Post by snarfe on Sept 23, 2005 6:48:56 GMT -5
Rushed. Beaten. Break me. Just superficial damage, Soul remains in-tact.
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Haiku
Nov 13, 2005 20:03:36 GMT -5
Post by chemicalyobessed on Nov 13, 2005 20:03:36 GMT -5
wow. you guys are skilled :]
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A_Green_Day
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Haiku
Dec 2, 2005 23:40:45 GMT -5
Post by A_Green_Day on Dec 2, 2005 23:40:45 GMT -5
I am so stupid I can hear you asking why I can't write haikus.
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Haiku
Dec 3, 2005 0:17:47 GMT -5
Post by daisy on Dec 3, 2005 0:17:47 GMT -5
^ That's a cool haiku. Sometimes I try to write them But they end up dumb.
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Haiku
Jul 27, 2008 17:52:46 GMT -5
Post by credo on Jul 27, 2008 17:52:46 GMT -5
Petals fall around, I am a lonely watcher, But who watches me
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